Sunday, November 15, 2009

ESSAY self evaluation of my academic year


Introduction

In this essay I going to speak about my self evaluatiom of my academic year 2009. I want to tell, how was my year; the tihings that I learned, my opinion about the differents subjects, teachers and the people I met the works that a i did make, and how all of this has been internalized to my life. Also, in this essay I going to say how was my experience on terrain, because a went to valle del Choapa and Petoca povience, to make a diagnosis social and a study about patrimonial food respectively.

Body

In academic terms, my experience was very relaxed because I don’t like overburden of things to do, I like take time to do other things (stay with my son, make sports, work in other thinks, travel and learn about the life). My first semester was a little boring, I learned very important things in estructuralism subjects with Rolf teacher, Rolf it´s a very good person and he teach me a lot of things about anthropolgy and life, also in these semeter I met juan LeBert that is other great person that gave me new knowledge, but in general the firs semeter was in academics terms was boring becuase I was a little tired of the university and I don’t want study a lot. So anyway, I passed all subjects.

In my second semester, the reality has been the same than last semester. I don’t want study more,I feell so tired and I want time to make the thinks that I like. So the antrhopoly was my election and have finish to study it, any way a feel so happy to be in university, integrating a knowledge that olny a few persons can access to it. In this semester I traveled to Valle del Choapa, and I met very beutifull people and great places, I learned abuot traditional practices and lifestyle of rurality, I lived a very special experince to my life in there zone. Also I went to Petorca to make a study about ptrimonial food, this job is have been funded to FIA (an apartament of Ministry of Agriculture), I’m working with others mates, and we are in charge of teacher Sonia Montecino. This have a very good experince to learn the work of anthropologists in field.

In general, this have been a good semester and I hope to approve all subjects.

Conclution

My academic year has been difficult, becuase I feel so tired to study, I need make thing that make me feel good, that make me feel live and complete. Any way, the university have been a great experience where I have know a lot of things and I met a lot of people important. Specialy a say thank to experience in terrain because was very important for my life.

1 comment:

  1. Good, Mati.

    In terms of structure, the essay is OK but as you may suppose, there are important sentence stucture problems that should be taken care of if you want to improve your English.

    This is the evaluation criteria.

    -Task: All aspects are sufficiently handled. 3 points

    -Lexis: Good use of lexical resources /Coherence generally well handled.
    2 points.

    -Grammar is weak with noticeable errors. 1 point

    TOTAL SCORE: 6 POINTS: GRADE: 4.7

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