I want to know a lot of contries. Ithink that around the world there are a lot of beautifull and interesting places. In America, for exmple, I feel curiosity for know all countries since Mexico to south, including the islands of Haití, Jamaica, Cuba, etc. In center of America there is an especial way to understand the life; The happines, the music, "el sabor", the dance, the clime, "mulatos", the beaches and other things that makes of these zones a particular place with an especific culture. In southamerica, we can see diferents cutural and natives elements that makes of this land a very diverse place. I fell particular attracted by Brazil and Bolivia. Also in South America there are countries that in any time it was "french colonias" as well as Surinam, Guyana and Guyana Francesa, this countries are places that I don't know nothing and i could like to learn about of these people.
Out of america I want to visit Rapa Nui, Vietnam, China and India. I know that I'm a little dreamer, but is that a could ilike to do in my life. I want to travel treating to learn languages.
Finaly, a country that I want to live and work, at least one year, is Australia. I have family there and I want t see them. I'm just waiting to end my carreer to make money and go.
Hi Matías,
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Paula
Mati
ReplyDeleteYou want to visit many places!
I hope you can make all your projects!
Mati,
ReplyDeleteI am a dreamer too. I would like to go to all that places too. The diversity of this planet is a wonderful thing... it is the thing that it made me want to be an anthropologist.
Nice, Mati.
ReplyDeleteWork with a partner and analyze the following sentences you wrote. How can you improve them?
1. "I feel curiosity for know all countries since Mexico to south, including the islands of Haití, Jamaica, Cuba, etc."
2. "In southamerica, we can see diferents cutural and natives elements that makes of this land a very diverse place."
3. "I fell particular attracted by Brazil and Bolivia"
4. "Also in South America there are countries that in any time it was "french colonias" as well as Surinam, Guyana and Guyana Francesa, this countries are places that I don't know nothing and i could like to learn about of these people."
5. "I want to travel treating to learn languages"
You get 1.5 points.
Paula
Southamerica is great, if sometime in my life I have the time and the money to travel around the continent, Im sure I will.
ReplyDeleteC`ya.
Hi mati, I will try to improve your post.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, you have some misspellings, like "contries" (countries), "diferents" (differents).
The sentence "I feel curiosity for know all countries since Mexico to south" doesnt have much sense, be better "I feel curiosity for know about all countries since Mexico to south".
The sentence "I feel particular attracted by Brazil and Bolivia" its easy to improve, just
add an y before particular. (Particulary)
I really dont understand this sentence "but is that a could I like to do in my life", I think is not coherent, I really dont get it.
How nice that you want to travel to many countries. I want to do the same! Traveling around the world. However, I think this requires much much money...There are savings from today.
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